this was a very strange pairing
but i felt shippo was very in character
so it was good too

I'm glad I read this, it was very interesting in a strange way
I like your style :)

Speechless.
I love this fic a lot. I'm not even kidding. It's heartbreaking and tragic, but still amazing.
Shippou's thoughts were perfect and I particularly loved this line: "Shippo ran deep into the forest and cried, because she wasn’t there, because they could never be, and because he knew."
Poor little Shippou!
Nice job on this!
-Star

wow.

That was amazing. Very well done. Loved it.

Haha, when you said "prepare to be disgusted", I somehow thought the couple was InuYasha and Shippou. Stupid huh? Haha.
Anyway, I am rather confused. But I still like it. Ha...

Kikyo/Shippo? Quite an uncommon couple indeed, but the fanfic itself was good.

Huh...I never thought of Kikyo/Shippo. O.O; But you portray them quite nicely in this fanfic. x]

For your next story, I think Ayame should go with Koga. :]

Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more stories from you! :D