Reviews for Unraveling of a Dune

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starriskies 2008-07-06 ch 7,	abusefantastic story! i love it!
My painful Symphony 2008-04-07 ch 7,	abusehahahahhahahahahahahahahahwipes tears away and coughs that was amazing the combo of tears, laughter and romance was incredible i was so sad when it ended but i defintely added this to my favorites list ^_^
Broken-Hearts-of-Angels 2008-01-24 ch 7,	abuseLol, never in Gaara's life has he felt so...vulnerable, so complete, so ignimatic? ...degraded... -.-' lmao! wow, didn't see that word coming! XD wow, that kid sure can pack a punch! Gaara's stepping in danger territory there, ahh, back away slowly! seriously, never insult Sakura's hair just after she went out of pregnancy. Wow, even though she went to Suna, practically all that time, there wasn't any mention of Sasuke and Naruto. Well! loved the story, and I love your work! keep it up! 9.5/10! ^^
Broken-Hearts-of-Angels 2008-01-24 ch 2,	abuseAhh! Okay, the computer JUST didn't let me send the last review, so, sigh, I'LL HAVE TO START AGAIN! T.T okay, now what did I write last time again, um, Gaara was a little OOC'd, but I can't really see him NOT being OOC'd when he's in love, because I've never really seen it happen. Your writing style is awesome, I only found a couple of mistakes, and they were either not important or not noticible. Don't have much confidence in yourself? lol, ahh, same here... -.-' Oh! glad you like reviews, cuz it isn't very often when I reply a fanfic more than once, I usually do a really long one at the end. what else was I going to say...um, I think that's it. ^^;
Broken-Hearts-of-Angels 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat chapter, I think i'm going to really like this fanfic. Yes, Gaara is actually quite hard to work with. I think it is because of the fact that in the shippuden, he changes to something totally opposite of what he was from before. Your spelling and puncuation was flawless. I seriously had to look up words, I think that was a first for me! Like Lackadaisical. I honestly have never heard of it from before. Great job! I really liked it. ^^
dragon_fly 2007-12-02 ch 7, anon.	abuseOMG, I was lauphing so hard at the end there... Whoo! A second excellent Garra fic, that was well written, with, dare I say it, GOOD GRAMMER. Double points for you! Loved your story, I'm defiatly going to look at the others you wrote. PLEASE, for the sanity of us reviers, KEEP WRITING!
Goatis 2007-11-16 ch 7,	abuseVery cute story. I liked the way you wrote this, developing a friendship between the two before anything sexual or romantic came into the picture. And that ending note was funny too the way you have the kid basically projecting how much more powerful he's going to be than his own parents.
Carnivorous Panda 2007-11-11 ch 7,	abuseglomp Your story totally made my day. x3 I love it!
FF Punk Chick 2007-04-13 ch 7,	abuseI have to say, that was one of the most dramatic, and still funny stories I have ever read. The last two chapters were my favorite. Dang, that baby's going to be more powerful than Gaara, Sesshomaru (dont know if you know him), Sakura and Naruto combined! I was glad to have read it. Freedom Fighter has spoken
Waterfade 2007-04-06 ch 7,	abuseOMGAWD, that was SO adorably CUTEE! Oh jeez, definetely a fav.
Ishanatur 2007-04-04 ch 7,	abuseamazing absoluteley amazing I almost lost my voice from screaming I had to narate the entire story to my roommate with quotes well I'm off to read some of your other work hope you read mine
Ash 2007-04-01 ch 7, anon.	abuseLOL, wonderful just wonderful, and the ending was great. Gaara being well hen peeked was halarious. Did I miss it or did you leave the name of the baby out? Loved it.
Maddy 2007-03-24 ch 7, anon.	abuseOMG THAT WUZ SO FREAKING CUTE! Loved it! The baby's so cute. haha.
Angel 2007-03-16 ch 7, anon.	abuseToo lazy to log in Nice story. One of my favorite pairings. -Angel
lovefordemons 2007-01-25 ch 2,	abuseI liked it. But then again, i am a big fan of Gaara's. I like, like you, am not very good with the whole self-confidece thing, so if you could look up me name, lovefordemons, and read my story there, then perhaps send me a reveiw, i would deeply aprecciate(sp) it. Keep on writing, as will i. byebyez ^-^

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