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Reviews For: Superchu

Kenji 2007-07-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI would rewrite it like so: Mysterious meteorite lands near camp where Ash-tachi are snoozing (The shock of the impact immediately wakes them up), Pikachu investigates, get massive radiation exposure, later realizes he gained superpowers and the meteorite was composed of KRYPTONITE! Unlike Superman, Kryptonite GIVES Pikachu superpowers, and his weakness is... ketchup (Who DIDN'T see it coming?) The gang make a special costume for Pikachu to disguise his identity and later forms a Pokemon Justice League! It would also be chock full of comedy as well as action.
clara200 2006-09-14 ch 1,	abuseThat is cool having a superhero pokemon. I would help him by keeping his secret.
Gundamknight 2006-08-14 ch 1, anon.	abusethis reminds of Superman and I bet that the Water Stone is like Kryptonite to Superchu and its name is a little funny. your fellow author, GK
Dark Ketchum 2006-08-12 ch 1,	abuseAGH! The joke! The joke was so... CORNY! Lol. I've never read a story like this, and it was really good. Except for the joke "He felt super"... C'mon, you could've come up with something better then that.