it is very well written but can you hurry up and write the next chapter? i have waited for more than one month!

like it! keep going!

I actually like the possibility of JP & Mia. Seriously, I think Michael & Mia have run out of steam. And yes, JP does have a huge crush on Mia.

I love your characterizations of Mia, Lilly & JP. Good job! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

LOVE IT!! update pls.

Wow. This story for a change from most PD fanfics actually had great charachterization and writing style. Like someone said, nice set up for Mia/JP interaction. But just a warning, I *am* a M/M diehard shipper. So that may make me (and not to mention some others) biased if it pans out to be Mia/JP. ( I hope it's not >.< ) But, great writing!

write more!

durn durn durn! o drama! lol update!

A nice set up for Mia/J.P. interaction with the whole Beauty and the Beast thing. I love that someone else is exploring the whole option of J.P./Mia, instead of just ignoring the possibility. Anyways, I think you're doing a great job with the style, grammar, and over-all plot, so you'd better hurry up and get out another chapter :).

loved it...but it was too short...i think...so i hope you piblish the next chapter soon...

Great start! Update soon, please!:)
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