OMG! I am crying right now. And you did that to me. :) Really great story, I liked it a lot. So dark but still so good. And the happy ending saved me.

aww i loved this story it was very good.

That was excellnet. Loved the darkness, withnt he little light at the end.

Great Job!

WOW THAT WAS GREAT. YOU MADE TEARS COME TO MY EYES.
ANYMORE...

Wow. That was... intense. It was incredibly well-written, and the backdrop of the undercover mission was just enough to make everything very dark, but only told us what we needed to know. What you did with Michelle was chilling, but intriguing. Very dark, but really excellent work.

that was so good, i love angst! it was very intesting and kept me hooked al the way thru, u shud write more tnm angst...

I have to admit that so far I'm hooked. I can take all the angst you can throw at me, so long as it ends happily for them. The more they have to overcome to be together the better, so long as they are together. If you take us into all the horrible things she had to experience at the hands of these terrorists, you have to give us one good seen of her and Tony overcoming everything she's been through physically to prove they can still be together and make it work.

This is a good story. I love the writing

Wow, truly beautiful writing. You had me from the very first words. I love the implication of horror behind the story, which you made so palpable without really going into details. And I love Michelle's fragility; you so very rarely get to see it on the show, and you've managed to get it exactly right - haunting, but not sappy or blubbery.
Incredible work, and please, feel free to write more 24 fics! :)

well,I liked it.the way Tony and Michelle acted with each other is just great.I hope it's not a one shot cuz there are some things that I don't really understand about the undercover mission.I would appreciate it if you added another chapter explaining what happened.

interesting.