I like how you didn't say her name until the end. I'm sorry if this wasn't your intention, but it made me laugh when I read it :)

Anyway, though I think Tawnypelt was a little too profound at times, I did enjoy this. You have a very solid writing style and an interesting plot.

Nice work :)

You always write cute stories! I'm so jealous. i also read your profile. i swear i luaged my head off. Way to funny. Way to creative. Way to cool GO KEWIX!1

ThornxTawny? Hm...very interesting. Very nicly written story by the way.

He he, cute.

cute!

I KNEW IT! I knew it was Tawnypelt.

That one wasn't my favorite,but it was cute.Still cute,don't worry.

I just KNEW that it was Tawnypelt!

That was a really good one!

-MOOsey

:3 Aw, cute!

-Cloudfire

This was great, not overly dramatic like some oneshots. Though those are good too, but this was simple. Cute and sweet. Great story I look forward to more of them! )

- Atra

Hah! I KNEW it was Tawnypelt! Wh00t! Go me! Jk.

Great story! Too bad some people just read and NOT review, eh?

AW! SWEET! :)

I LUFF IT! I'm not crazy about the pairing either, but it doesn't seem... romantic to me. Just like two best friends sitting together reminsicing...

Whoah! I didn't expect that. I really liked it, though. I really sensed a connection between the two.

Can cats even smile?

JUST KIDDING.

But it was a good fic, and I congratulate you! Good luck on later fics!

-MidnightPhoenix320-