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| Sunrise Phoenix 2008-02-10 ch 2,  | abusethis is so good! Please finish, it's like Tarzan; my fav movie. |
| sliders245 2007-09-14 ch 2, | abusePlease update! |
| XShootingStarX 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abusecool a sequel! will they remember their pasts? oh. O.O Atemu is like Tarzan, cept with wolves not apes...will he still remember how to speak with them later? and what's this about a prophecy? i like how it's set in the future, where there's no 'technology' and stuff. very cool =) update soon! |
| wasted-time 2007-08-05 ch 2, | abuseAh, so cute! *hugs wolfy Atemu* Looking forward to reading more! |
| DPshadow 2007-06-02 ch 2, | abuseohh this is great, i love wolfs, hope you continue soon um, one question, when does this take place, i mean what year does it take place in? other than that great story and hope you continue soon |
| dragonlady222 2006-11-27 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter. I'm glad Yami is progressing so well. Yugi is doing an amazing job teaching him. |
| yamiyugifanadic 2006-11-26 ch 2, | abuseHuh...how cleaver. I was wondering...I mean, you have a whole new storyline in here it seems, but it is still tying into Kame quite well. I say awsome, when I did a sequel, it just died..xD This is very good! :D I love Atemu hehe ^-^ He is so cute as a wolf...like person! Man can't wait for the next chapter, I really want to know what happens when he goes to the human village. ...also kinda curious how the physical attraction between the two will come into play. I mean...gona be interesting to see how the two respond to that, and how Yugi's village does as well. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, awsome story! :D |
| Carmen-Nemrac 2006-11-25 ch 2, | abusewhoahahaha that was really cool, hehehe its so cute XD hope you update again soon!! bye bye! |
| mint 2006-11-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseUpdate soon! It's greaat. Can't wait what's next.. |
| SilverWing147 2006-11-22 ch 2, | abuseThat was gorgeous. I love your work. there was one or two minor mistakes... I can't really remember them now, I think you wrote died instead of dead, but that could've been on purpose. But just one or two typos, but you hardly notice them in the grand scheme of things. Your story still "Winz teh Internetz" Worth the wait. Please update again soon. cheers |
| Atemu Yugi Lover34 2006-11-22 ch 2, | abuseI definitely think it's interesting. Update soon plz. |
| Atemu Yugi Lover34 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI think it's good...A bit confusing but I think it'll clear up later on. Well I gotta go...School calls. Sorry this is late. Update soon please. |
| Kari-Sama(Still not logged ... 2006-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one a lot. I can hardly wait to see what Yuugi's fate is! |
| yamiyugifanadic 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, never expected this. I like your idea, on how it is after our time, but more before our time as well (that funny, parallel universe type deal lol) But hn...interesting. Were they in Egypt, was Atemu supposed to be heir to the Pharaoh's throne? I got slight puzzled, cuz...they kinda randomly had a plane there ^^; I thought all the tech. was lost...oh well ^-^ I wonder who his lover is going to be...hm...*rubs hands together* I guess I'll have ta' find out eh? :D Nice new story and chapter, these presequels and...sequels are very different from the orignal Kame. Can't wait to read more ^-^ |
| dragonlady222 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Good start. |