nicely done.
I liked the song too. I think I'll check it out.
I hope I can read more from you.

I liked the story. PLEASE countinue it.

Actually I like this one. The image of Haruka owning a club is oddly fitting.

Aww...very sweet story! ^^ Think I'll go put this on my favorites...^^

Interesting story, keep up the good work.

*Pokes* Nice going, I liked it. I'm cutting this short 'cause I've gotta start on my own fic now so gomen nasi!

Ja ne,
Ten'ousai

ah! Seiya&Usagi r MARRIED! &PREGNANT! YAY! HAPPY DAY! ok... well I think it needs... a prequel, Like when they first decieded2open the club...and a squel! like when Haruka&Michiru start seeing MOST of eachoter... and when BABY is born, and when H/M get married!! E! I like it!

~ISC

Aw! That was great! It was cool to see Michiru making all the moves for once. ;)

This is a great one-shot! I never really knew people could fall in love by staring at each other without talking to one another, but I guess they could from reading your one-shot! ^__^

-Sierra.

I like your story. Please continue it.

Great! a little quick and sad at the beginning but still cute.

good job. i really liked it

this was awesome. i really liked it. bye!

Love it!

although i don't really like it when Haruka said "fall in lust?" what, she doesn't love her? only lust? Michiru seemed fell in lust too..

but overall.. love it! you brought up the atmosphere.
update!

that was awesome ... ”And my pathetic excuse for a brother-in-law?” that was good one

keep up the great work