I really like this story because you don't make Naruto sound all divine and beautiful in it.

Very unique and incredibly poetic. Reminded me of a good book.

very nice

Wow. I'm not sure how I stumbled upon this, but it's really, really beautifully written. It was captivating from the beginning to end--textures and colors and...wow.

Mm, your wording is so lovely, and I especially like how brief this is. I think it really fits the sudden desperateness of the moment.

Think I'll go read that poem now.

*sque* i don't understand why more people have reviewed this, it's pretty cool-eo. yeah, i said 'cool-eo'.

I adore your structure. This deviates from "normalcy" just enough to captivate...it was really very good.

This was really creepy and confusing and absolutely GORGEOUS. Must read more.

I adore the imagery in this. It's perfectly dark without really the angst; it's turmoil and thoughts and emotions and jumbled together in a wonderfully confusing mix.

It's also the type of thing that makes you want to squeal at surface glance, then pause and ponder at the second.

Wonderful.

Oh my god, your style in this was absolutely lovely. Marry me? That was beautiful... It's been a long time since I've read anything that was really that good.

--Daitai

Wow...

That was short, simple, and gorgeous. I'm incredibly impressed.

Beautiful, artistic and damn hot

Kawai! ^^
...and sad, very sad...

I have reviewed for 3 out of your stories in around thirty minutes. That's seriously a record more review/time for me. I never review.

Unless, of course, it's something outstanding.

And this is plenty outstanding. Sasuke is so stupid it hurts, and this fic is so full of grace that it hurts more. Your fic really tugs at my inner feelings, which is difficult to do because in most fics barely get my attention enough to do so.

This fic has beautifly ugly images. That's so great!

Interesting...

"Reviewing is also strongly recommended, because reviewing is Good, and authors Live off of it, and living authors can improve more than dead ones."

xD I can't help but giggle madly at that. True, very true. Every author loves reviews. And you, you especially /deserve/ reviews, so I shall review. ^^

This fic was terribly good. Beautifully written, and creating such a powerful imagery. The middle of the fic is so fast-paced, it's almost /made/ of heartbeats. Forgive me if you don't get what I mean; this fic's made me incoherent with its wonderfulness.

And it's so nice and pretty and hot and SasuNaru-ish. It's just lovely, really. I especially love the sentence you used in your summary. But of course, it would probably be one of the sentences you loved most as well, because most authors tend to use their favourite sentences in the summary, right? ^^

Every bit of this fic is love. x3

~Kaze