when is this set? other wise fantastic

That was good. Long, too. Looking forward to the sequel, unless, of course, it's already on line.
This was seriously really cool. I'm glad you wrote it.

Man . . . I thought I was so behind in reading but I have yet to come across a chapter I haven't reveiwed yet . . . cept for these aurther note things

Wait?! This is the end? Well . . . besides that. I think the mystery man is Jack because I'm cool like that.
I got confused. It was right after the part when Dalek said it was Katherine, (as wrong as that was. She's going to become an annoying little robot?) I didn't get what Rose and the doctor were doing, and why did Rose become unconscious? and how did they 'die' ?

wow!
great chappie, but so sad!!
looking forward to the rest!!
:)

Ok, I started reading the first chapter again by accident and I kept thinking . . .I read this! Why did she put it up twice?! Is this a flashback?! . . . then I saw I was on chapter 1. HAHAHAHAHA! and you know, Lynda? I keep thinking she suppose to be dead and I'm always surprize when she pops up. She finally dies now. Um . . .who are the other people with them fighting the Dalek. I don't remember them. I don't believe Jack's dead because you love Jack. It's like saying "I hate Pyro" Oh wait! You did say that!

O.O . . .Why is Jack kissing people? I understand if he's kissing them goodby like the Europeans do, but you used the word 'passionately', Sorry if that's giving me the wrong idea.

Jack's speech to Katherine is one of the sweetest I've ever read, fantastic writing.

Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner until I got the email for chapter nine I didn't know you had written chapter eight, excellent chapter.

HAHAHAHA . . .ah Jack. I laughed when he said "Do I look like an out of bounds kinda guy?" and blasted the door down. I also like when he zapped Lynda and the doctor said "You killed her," Not "YOU KILLED HER!!" But just "You killed her." HAHAHAHA

Is the Tardis onstable or something because it seems like things just pop to random places. I Lynda just a random girl, or am I suppose to know her? Rose died quite suddenly. I had to reread that sentence to make sure I read it correctly

Very good and I won't mock you. Being a semi-American myself I know we don't have a lot of great game shows that would work with your story

I think I see a Capt Jack conquest in the making; very good story

Excellent start

Wonderful, I love the Doctor reaction he fell to his knees etc.

SG