 Geek Squared 1307 8/21/06 . chapter 1Bravo! (Or is it Brava?) It's great! It reminded me of one of those romantic movie scenes in which time slows down and there are tricky camera angles to keep the audience from seeing one of the people so they are surprised later. When I saw the line "She laid her hand on the 'G' engraved on his newly knit Weasley jumper, I thought to myself "What the...?" before comprehension dawned. I love it when that happens. Great job, and I look forward to reading more from you. Happy reading and writing! |