I disagree. Even though the prologue had spelling errors (altar, off) and was incredibly short, this one has other problems, formatting, to be precise.

Knuckles, getting bored of the emerald, is OOC. He never whines about the time he wastes in official issues. Letting the Master Emerald be taken is also OOC. He is too stubborn, to self-confident.

That and the format do not make a good scene. My recommendation would be to space out the dialogue on a paragraph per quotation basis and add comments to it.

Below average.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Hey, good job. Other than the fact that Tails is a weiner, good job! Hey, I haven't been near a computer in the last several days so sorry it took so long. I only know a wee bit about Sonic. One thing I know is, Scratch and Grounder are in it! Yes! All hail the chicken and the bulldozer

Hmm...I've got to say, I'm impressed.

I'm not much of a Sonic fan, as I have only played one game of the series and it doesn't help that I'm a Nintendo freak.
As far as I can tell, the character's traits are accurate enough (I say 'as far as I call tell' because I've only seen their traits on that one game: Sonic Adventure 2 Battle).

I know now else has reviewed this story (at the point of time I did this one) but keep it up! It's pretty dang good.