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| DianeB 2007-05-12 ch 5,  | abuseThis was cute. I don't think you needed to divide it into so many chapters, but since I have a short attention span anyway, it worked pretty well for me! I liked that you gave Endora a smidgen of depth by having her make Samantha get the whole story before she accused Darrin of cheating. I haven't seen "Rent" (sorry!), but I applaud your incoporating some lines from the show into this story. That's part of what fanfiction is all about, IMNSHO. (And I see you've written *a lot* of Rent fic...) |
| nannygirl 2006-11-18 ch 4, | abuselol great fic! can't wait for more! |
| Eliza Spootkitten 2006-11-11 ch 4, | abuseDudes! Seriously! You needs to update now! This story is great, but I don't think that Endora would be trying to get Samantha and Darrin back together. |
| abc 2006-11-06 ch 4, anon. | abusei love it as a whole i think it's great can't wait to see what happens next! |
| abc 2006-11-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseok i don't think this chapters was as well written as ur first and second chapter i can't pin point it but it think there somthing wrong wiht it maybe you'll figure it out by proofreading it |
| abc 2006-11-06 ch 2, anon. | abusewow it sound like something that could really happen in the tv show |
| abc 2006-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abusereally good start can't wait to read on |
| firefly 2006-09-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseHi; I've never read any of the Bewitched stories, so this is the first. It's really good, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. It was really interesting, so keep writing!! |
| Sam_the_Good_Witch 2006-08-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat story!! Poor Sam.. Mostly poor Darrin... Oh well, that's married life.. Anyways, pls update!! I'm dying to know what happens next... Until then, tata!! |
| rebafan4ever 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abusehey i love ur story so far so keep the chapters coming thanks alot! |
| Horror Friction 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abuseEk! Its awesome, I wanna hear more. Make like a goaly and think fast. I'll keep the reviews coming. |
| janica 2006-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abusereal cool... i can almost imagined it while i read... keep it up... and by the way can you put a teaser before you end a chapter? that way we have somethin to look forward to.. thanks |