This is a great story and I love the angst - the entire time I was reading the fic it just kept pulling at my heart strings. Felt my eyes water, especially at the ending.

The way you wrote the story is so good - it occurred to me that I really need to clean up my prose writing - and the feelings were conveyed so well. The characters were so Squall and Yuffie (even if I had not played FFVII yet, only from what I've read and heard) and they weren't OOC at all.

Thanks for the great read!

good fic so sad though...

Noo :( That was so sad :(

Wicked.
Loves it.
(:

Short, sad and just the right amount of quiet angst. Lovely ♥

Oh my god, I wanted to cry. It's really good! You're obviuosly skilled. I mean... you've written 60-some stories, AND you're really good. ^.^ I like this story/ oneshot! It's really good.

*tear* that was *sniff* amazing :( but sad

Aw, I like Squffie xD...It was sad though >

This made me spawn a love for Squffie.
And then crushed it with it's little heartless fingers.
But I still inexplicably love it; then again I've always loved Squall and Yuffie seperately. Surprised I never put them together.

I'm seriously still in shock. You know those little times when everything just stops and you choke. Just choke from shock and the corners of your eyes fill up with tears and you just don't know what to do or say.

Magical.

I loved it! Even for it's incredible ability to make me cry! This was so great, so IC in my opinion.

-Aisu

Simply gorgeous. ♥

Loved it. n_n

Poor Leon.
It's always him. Dx

【 FAVED your FACE 】

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WOW. SQUFFIE. damn it. this is like...
one of the best squffie's evaur.
coz.. they are too many stupid OOC squffie's
out there, & i hate em. they burn my eyes. -,-

butbutbut. this is great. i loved it ;D
WRITE more, taryn! ♥

` < 3 : FELIA.

Beautiful and heartbreaking. Excellent.

[ had to click the
'review' button a
million times for it
to freaking WORK ]

ufhdubjbajekfh --
SORRY it took me so
long to review this,
I didn't even GET
the stupid alert.
D:

but likeomgyeahit's
{ w o n d e r f u l }

it's so sad, (and
sickeningly descriptive
btw xD) and just amazing!
[ le jealous ]
you're such a good
writer, m'dear, I want
your talent. xDD

kk. FAVES&BAI ~
sayonara. xD
-- RENEE

I had to sit here and just... absorb.