you rock. my fave was chp 2!

aw... that is so sad... but yet, another amazin short dealt out by u... bring me more!

this is a really good set of drabbles so far. my fav was betrayal. update soon! je shippers die!

that sucks that she feels that way!

good work lady

This rocks! Keep writing cute chapters like these!

isn't freedom what we all want? isnt freedom what none of us shall ever get? freedom is as elusive as smoke, but alluring like perfume, calling we foolish humans to follow and catch it. but we cannot. there is no way for us to capture freedom, and so we shall forever be caged by society, expectations, and our own inhibitions. we shall but dream of freedom, delirious with a single whiff of its sweet fragrance, but forever unable to pursue it. (sheds single tear, walks off stage. lights fade to black)

i like the piece. it seems very realistic to me.

the first one was really sad. the second one was also really sad. just cuz it reminded me that jack was dead. he was my favorite character.

generally good stuff.

psht she was a total bessh! She doesnt deserve any guy :(

Jack aww

poor thing

cute writing

aw that was sad deary!hurry and write more sugarbutt

Aw! How sad!

Is there more? Because it was well-written!

Definitely awesome!

-williz

well i personally think it's pretty good.

nice job! :)