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Reviews for: The Clincher
R. R. Enrie
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
Lovely description of calustrophobia. I found out I was claustrophobic when I went to the tanning beds for the first time. God, I'll never do that again.
Mentally-Unstable
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
O_O WHOA!! That was great. That scene freaked me out too..mostly because it took me forever to figure it out but whatever..heh heh. You captured James' emotions perfectly...the whole "what the ** kind of thing is that to say" was great! You did an awesome job. I loved it. Write more!

Good luck with the tix, by the way...;)

-MU-
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