XD Nice.

I love the metaphor of choice, especially how it transcends into a real situation midway. Very clever and masterfully written.

Gah, so hot. And vaguely Oscar Wilde-ish at the end there.

You know? Mamori used to be confrontational with Yoi at the beginning of the series, but later on she calms down & hardly fights him..

I kinda liked it when she was more confrontational, tho. But later on even Gen (Musashi) once said that she's "mastered the art of cleaning up after him" XD

Anyway, this fic was so short, but nice ] It reminds me so much of Ranma & Akane

I love this story! Which means it's devine, right? Hell Yeah!

Izumi