What a yummy story ! You succeed on doing a sensual short story, which is, I think, is harder (and better) then writing a long fanfiction

*laughs*

lol hirmua singing? i gota see that!

Oh, my. Hot!

Juicy adult theme aside, I like how you kept Mamori in character despite putting her in such an unlikely setting for her. Same goes for the buzzed, slightly mellowed, singing Hiruma. ;)

My favorite line: "Lack of space," he'd said, grinning, and everyone had wisely kept their mouths shut.

Overall, sexy and yet perfectly credible.

I couldn't help but grin like a madman while reading this. Ahh...drunken people are crazy things. X3

bulletproof

Heh. Something tells me that Hiruma would get off on being told he was a bad man. _; Gorgeous image. I can completely envision this party.

Now this is a cute story! I'm glad to see some Hiruma/Mamori stories out there. There aren't nearly enough. I especially liked how you had Hiruma sniging softly... very interesting.

OMG! I LOVED it! Ha ha, I love you! (okay, that was odd) Anyways, I hope to hear more from you!

zixu,mi or uh, Izumi