|Reviews for And Here We Are|
| Hermi-ko 5/7/13 . chapter 1
Great short story, love it for what it is
| sakurenjiDREamer 7/1/11 . chapter 1
This is one of the good works. It's a piece of an artwork.
| Triste1 10/17/10 . chapter 1
I really liked this. It might be because of the late hour (3.23am), it might be simply because I'm feeling sentimental, but the emotion in this oneshot makes me smile. The parting line of unsaid words and a ringing silence was beautifuly coined as well. Lovely, simple lovely.
Keep writing and good luck with future works.
| Bar-Ohki 12/4/08 . chapter 1
| MangKulas 8/2/08 . chapter 1
you know, i don't think a lot of people realize, how even in a paragraph of 500 words or so, you can employ pure poetry with, indeed, all the spaces in between
| lescribble 4/23/08 . chapter 1
*sigh* I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!
This is the BEST HiruMamo short fanfic i ever read. It's so artistic and sweet.
*I actually memorized a couple of lines.* Hope you continue with HiruMamo, there really aren't enough fanfics shipping those two :)
Great Job :) Keep it up.
| selle18 12/28/07 . chapter 1
From hot sex talk to meaningful no talk? I love it.
It was so poetic in many different ways. Sad, even. Yes, the official start of a relationship was sweet and beautiful. But the end of three memorable high school years holds its own tragedy, so that a hint of sadness and goodbyes taints this story of beginnings.
My absolute favorite line: ...running her gloved finger along the bench in front of her, gathering dust, gathering time.
That one line there gave me such a chill.
| withsinkingheart 11/8/07 . chapter 1
I love your play on words, especially the last string of sentences. I've never seen a situation written out in that way, to me it was highly original and sweet _ I guess the level of writing is just that much more mature?
| colonelZ 3/23/07 . chapter 1
nice, you do a good job with portraying(sp?) the characters, i have a question though, why is this rated M? it seems to me like it is more like T.
| LadytehMa 8/29/06 . chapter 1
Well now. I've only just discovered ES21 and I must say - I don't think anyone else in this fandom can capture the characters quite as well as you have. I am very impressed by the calibre of your writing, I hope to see more of this pairing written by you. Thank you for the great story(ies)!
| Crimson Creature Izumi 8/11/06 . chapter 1
Nice, sweet, and short. I loved it.