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PfenixB
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Oh, that's adorable...and funny, because two of my female, non-lesbian friends just got "engaged" and gave each other rings. They didn't mention it in a school project, of course, but they've got their entire lives planned out together, complete with cheating spouses, lumpy couch, and head injuries. I'm not sure why they'd include something like a head injury, but who am I to judge?
Anyway, great fic. "Otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's no good." Beautiful.
lonelyassassin
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh my. That was interesting. Reminds me of my friends.
"Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good."
Great. *laughs*
Mistress of Muses
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
That gave me beautiful warm fuzzy feelings. I can see Sora wanting to be a housewife. XD The line "Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good." was just marvelous too.
HikariZaichuYami
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
zOMG! this was KAWAII SO DAMN ADORABLE!! :33

awe its so cute i just wanna hug it! i love the ending line its so riku-ish. lol :3

A++! 5/5 stars
lily23
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
This story is so funny.

"Fine," Sora says, with a slight pout. "Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good."
Riku sputters. "Sora!"
"What? Anyway, Kairi, wanna get married to Riku and me?"
"As long as you get the part time job." Kairi says.
"Okay." Sora agrees.

I love that part.
sorceress115
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
So cute!
llivla
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
My brain just exploded and went to a very special places where everyone loves this OT3 as much as I do. Seriously, I just rewatched the clips again and thought...well, you know. xD Anyway, this was lovely--I can just imagine them growing old and doing like,...tax forms. That's how much I love them. xD

Favoriting!
roxette143
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
Hahahahha..Good story
Moon Faery
2007-09-06 . chapter 1
Okay, I'll be honest. I don't like the Sora/Kairi/Riku menage, regardless of "focal member/couple" or whatever. Just not my cuppa. I don't seem to have a headspace where Kairi works with either or both of them in any sort of reciprocal romantic fashion.

Which is why I'm completely flabbergasted by this story. It fits perfectly with them and creates a space where I can actually SEE it happening. (It helps that this is taking place when all three were separated, and the effects of the events of the games are my major objection to things.) Riku keeping the ring in his pocket was just the right touch, and I loved how Kairi and Sora just went straight over his head. It said a lot about their friendship that they didn't bother to even consult him hypothetically on things.

In general, I found this entirely to my liking, and very in-character. For a hard-core slasher like myself, that's a challenge. Well done, indeed.
The Walker of Dreams
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
This is an absolutely adorable story. I love how matter-of-fact and serious Kairi and Sora are about the whole thing. Plus, the ring thing is so sweet. Also the line "Riku just stares, and wonders how he has managed to find such horrible, insane, stupid, and amazingly wonderful friends." is probably the best line I've read in a KH fan fiction in a long time.
xoVanilla-Bean
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
AH! I LOVED THE FLUFFY CUTENESS!! xD

I just adore their friendship. :D And this gave me the giggles! So sweet.

Haha, so childish and fun. :] And the ending line was great. :3

FaVeS~VanillaBean ♥
reversedhymnal
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
THAT IS ADORABLE AND I AM IN LOVE, XD

Rock on, babe!
UnIQuE Not Weird
2007-06-22 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! I normally don't like the Sora x Kairi x Riku pairing either, but I this fic was awesome! ^^
Vialana
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
This story is pretty much awesomeness incarnate.
The dynamics of the trio are perfect and I love to think about how they could possibly pull off such an interesting relationship once they actually do finally get around to being serious about the whole thing.
Riku, of course, stole the entire story with that final line.

I'm definitely putting this on my favourites list.

~Vialana
Guardian1
2006-12-16 . chapter 1
This was so adorable it actually gave me cavities. I want to hug it like a big fluffy teddybear.

"You expect Riku to support us both?" Oh, Kairi. You and Sora are DELIGHTFULLY INSANE. And you know Riku likes it.

Loved it badly.
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