 otaroo 2007-12-16 . chapter 1 can“t stop reading it over and over...i just love it !QwQ |
 oTaroo 2007-12-09 . chapter 1 i just love it! it would be great if you made another chap you...really you almost made my cry TwT |
 Red 2007-08-26 . chapter 1 wow
That was so... just... wow. Everything just...crushing yet happy at the same time. Amazing job. |
 SecretNinjaPlushie 2007-05-03 . chapter 1 Holy cheese whiz! This is the best fic of Hinasaku I've read in forever! And it's not even PWP! Which is great by the way, it has meaning, depth, the characters aren't just /there/ in the right place and time like most fics and it was all just hot, hot, hot!
~The Secret Ninja Plushie |
 r0nnie234 2007-01-11 . chapter 1 That was a great story! |
 nejilover15 2006-11-12 . chapter 1 well i loved your story i give it an A. i think you should have a lot of reviews to. |
 Ray Kay 2006-09-09 . chapter 1I am outraged. Very, very outraged. This fic should have a million positive reviews because this is VERY DAMN GOOD! I never even thought about SakuHina, but you have just done a great deed.
You gave them a reason to be together (which makes sense) and a reason for them to be seperated (which makes sense) and just...God, I can't even type what I want to say.
There are a lot of pointless yuri fics out there that are smut, and have zero reason to exist, but this is one of thr rare few that I am very willing to say, does not fall into that heinous category.
By the way, the reviewer who reccommended this to me (The Denominator) was right about your grammer. It really is excellent. I'm an A Level English Lit student, and you do not know how much my eyes hurt when I read fanfiction (so...many...errors...), but you have spared me!
THIS FANFICTION IS BRILLIANT.
From, mASSter, Ray Kay :) |
 sillymail 2006-09-09 . chapter 1It is so sad and sweet! I love it. |
 The Denominator 2006-08-30 . chapter 1Holy **, that was GOOD. This is such a bittersweet, romantic, heartfelt story. It was wonderful to read.
I understand what you mean by the characters aging and having different feelings than when they were kids.
I liked the layout as well. I can't tell you how difficult it is to read a fic and there's no paragraphs or sentence breaks or commas. So you get an 'A' in diction and grammer.
It's too bad it's a one-shot though. But I place no pressure on you writing more chapters. I think it stands well already. Yet, it would be nice if you did...
Yay! You did really good work, I must say. |
 I like angst 2006-08-10 . chapter 1I liked it alot. It was very nicely written and the emotions were realistic. I also like the uncertain ending it felt very human. Over all, a very good story. |
 Chibi Tetra 2006-08-10 . chapter 1Wow... this is possibly the best HinaSaku I've ever read.. great job. If this isn't a oneshot, please continue! |
 Videot2010 2006-08-10 . chapter 1Is this fic goona turn into a rated M one? |