Great story it's cute! ... What's a pallete?

Great story! Update soon!

a sweet typical hinata thing to do. :)
thumbs up!

Nice chapter,I'll be looking forward for more.

Heh. Liked it. I would help you with constructive critism, but right now I found the chapter perfect(Translation: I'm a lazy ** XD). Please update soon. I am waiting for the fluff and/or humor...n.n

You spelt kyuubi wrong

I really like this story so far. It's very well written, and the divergence is done very well indeed. Plus, the 1st person perpsective is also done very well.
I've nothing to truly critique - spelling and grammer were very good.
I look forward to seeing how this plays out. I await the next chapter.