OMG! i love this story. is that the end? are u making another chapter or a sequal? PLEASE, PLEASE do so. u did an amazing job!

woww!! this story rocks so far! you must update soon!!

this deserves so much more praise! it is such an original story, it was really surprising when Naruto and hinata joined sasusaku, very unpredictable and clever! You write with amazing detail...the story is wonderfully paced and its so vividly placed, i cant stop thinking bout it! ><
great job! and keep up the good work!

Great job, can we hope to see a part two...?

wow this is really good
i hope hinata and naruto come together
im really surprised you were able to change sasuke and not make him seem ooc
youve got talent
keep up the good work and update soon
ciao for now

aw man this story is cool too. plz continue

I loved this story. For all that i have just read (it took me two hours to read the entire story), your fanfiction deserves to be noticed. I don't really like the SasuSaku pairing but you made it seem more realistic. Though i thought i should bring up the fact that this last chapter should have been rated M XD (along with the other one). I just wanted to let you know before someone reports you. Any way nice work, i enjoyed it =D

good start, but its AU, not AR

Nice story. ^^ One I can actually read 6 chapters straight without getting bored.

I REALLY LIKE WERE THIS IS GOING.

PLEASE FINISH IT!