I love the idea of Ms. Parker's revenge!

M...like candy on a shelf, if you want a taste just help yourself. [snickers] Love it!!

great start...very interesting...can't wait for some more JMP

update soon cuz u got me hooked!!

Annette, thank you for your review!
Replying to your review here since you do not have a ff account.
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I thought smut needn't any excuse? ;) Seriously though, I can see your point, something that certainly should be taken into consideration.

This story was for the most part meant to be a post IOTH fanfic, so I was picturing there being more circumstances to her successful "capture". Some possibly hinted, like lack of stilettos (stilettos + small pebbles = bad mix imo), Jarod possibly distracted or not at all expecting her to show up, thus not getting much of an advance. Some possibly to be revealed later in the story (if there'll be more to add). And of course just what Miss Parker's intentions are, is she not letting him getting away from The Centre, or herself, again?

For now I'm taking the cowardly way out, to possbly write on a continuation later :)

please continue!

First fic. Congratulations. Easy to read and funny. I knew you could do it. See?

considering that the strip search of Miss Parker happened during the first two seasons, I doubt she would reciprocate in the same manner. There were other times she captured him, and she never forced Jarod to, so why now? And to get him so easily? I would have had her shoot him from a stun gun at a distance, or gassed the place where he slept, not tackle him. Are you sure this isn't wishful thinking sort of a battle of the sexes?

Can only imagine a nervous pretender. :-)

Really great for a fist fanfic. I love the last line Parker said. Write other ones like that.

Not bad. I like the way Parker's getting her revenge for being stripped search. Now it's Jarod's turn.

Your grammar just need some polishing but for a first tP fanfic, you're doing a nice job. Keep it up.

Hope you continue this story.

Regards,

starclipper01

"Like a slim black clad panther with deadly and pierceing cold blue eyes." Love the descriptive. Wonderful start. Hope you continue soon.

Hi Miravisu,

Very interesting little story. You're doing Great. Please continue.

Mercy