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Naraku's Dinky
2009-10-26 . chapter 2
Are you planning on writing a third chapter? I like this story so far.
YukinoKara
2009-10-18 . chapter 2
Wow. This is very well written! I really like how you portray both Riza and Lust, and I think you're doing an amazing job with it.

The descriptions are perfect, and it's really easy to picture!

I hope you're continuing this :) If so, good luck with the next chapter, and I really look forward to it!

~YukinoKara, amazed.
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2009-10-11 . chapter 2
please update!! XD
Rowan J. Holden
2009-06-17 . chapter 2
You need to write more. These are both excellent chapters. Needless to say, I've been waiting for months for chapter three, and I can hardly wait.
Moonlit Water Sunny River
2009-02-05 . chapter 2
MORE >.O
this is one of my fave stories and you haven't updated since ever. PLEASE i want to know what happens!
kunf'you'z-ed
2008-03-12 . chapter 2
hello. i really want you to make another chapter!! i absolutely loved this but you stopped writing! Please?
Kazekirei
2007-08-21 . chapter 2
Amazing story! I really want to see more of this. Lust and Riza's interaction are near flawless, and the whole story is well-executed.
Killjoy3000
2007-08-02 . chapter 1
great fic when is the next chapter because I'm looking forward to it
PersianLady
2007-02-12 . chapter 2
wow! yuri fanfic! I had been looking for it and really hope that you continue!
bloob
2007-02-10 . chapter 2
Please update. This story rocks.
YukiVampyra
2007-01-21 . chapter 2
MORE! MOREMOREMORE! Please!

Yuki V.
crimsonshrouds
2007-01-11 . chapter 2
i like please continue this story is great
arcticinferno
2007-01-01 . chapter 2
Awesome unfolding of the plot. Your descriptions are damn good too.
yole star
2007-01-01 . chapter 2
quite good, continue.
envy twin
2006-12-25 . chapter 2
man i love this fic it's friggin aweesome.
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