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| Harry2 2007-10-05 ch 7, | abuseWell, this is one time even Barken can't deny what is going on! And to say that Kim and Ron had a small part to do with this should earn them some respect from not only their peers, but many other organizations as well. |
| Harry2 2007-10-04 ch 6, | abuseI think that Megatron learned something this day that he will NEVER forget, even if he does become Galvatron: NEVER, EVER, HARM A HUMAN CHILD! Not if he wants to survive, because I have NEVER seen Prime get that irate before! And I don't think that Megatron wants to see that happen again either! |
| Aero Tendo 2007-08-05 ch 5, | abuseInteresting story, I read all 5 chapters straight through! I liked how you got the cartoon version of the Transformers (including movie version) but Stargate SG-1 being sent to help? What's next? Stargate's spaceship to lay some firepower on Megatron and the others from orbit? Maybe teleport them with their teleportation tech? The fighter craft taking out Starscream and the others? Robotic alien tech versus the hybrid human/alien tech. Now that would be a cool sight. The mind swap thing was SO Drakken but used a different way. I doubt Megatron would be happy to know he was reusing a idea that failed for a 'fleshling'. Starscream seems to almost play the role of Shego in a way, lol! I look forward to seeing what happens in Chapter 6! Keep up the good work! |
| Suiadan 2007-07-25 ch 5, | abuseLooks interesting, please update soon. |
| DRIFTA 2007-07-18 ch 5, | abuseDude this story rocks man continue the story! |
| Classic Cowboy 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseno Bee!! good stuff my friend, I can't believe I hadn't reviewed before now but I'm liking this. Especially Kim's reaction to being left out of the fight and Ron talking her down. nicely done, keep it up! |
| bthecatslayer 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseThat's it? You can't leave us hanging like this! Great story. Joe |
| Harry2 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseSomehow, I think that Prime was using Bumblebee for decoy purposes. I think that Ron and KP are safe inside that ark, and that Terran assistance is on the way! Can you say ARIELBOTS anyone? |
| dr-fan/mai-lover 2007-07-17 ch 5, anon. | abusebervo have pherime-face-as-kp-face-ther-battle-happin-at-same-time-look i know kp&booine-reivels i did-not-kp-alomt-killing-booine-waes-satup-on-youer-paert-just-a-mjor-faovr have-meet-perime&the atuobots yaes i caer-about-booine |
| Harry2 2007-07-17 ch 4, | abuseI hope that all of this is getting through to you KP. Ron IS more than your partner, he is your SOUL MATE! Who else would go through all that you do, all the time, if he didn't care about you! NOW LET HIM KNOW IT, BEFORE ITS TOO LATE! |
| Harry2 2007-07-17 ch 3, | abuseGetting Kim and her body out of this mess is NOT going to be easy! Its going to take a mixture of guts (which we KNOW Prime has!) and some smart thinking (which again we know Prime has plenty of) to get out of this situation! |
| Harry2 2007-07-17 ch 2, | abuseI'll give Megatron credit, this is one scheme that NO ONE would ever suspect! Now, the question is, how can the Autobots figure out how to reverse the process and get Kim back in her own body!?! |
| Harry2 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseMegatron is many things, but he is no fool. He has something up his mechanical sleeve. Just what, I don't know YET! |
| Contia Mirian 2007-07-07 ch 4, | abuseinteresting, more soon, please |
| Comet Moon 2007-06-09 ch 4, | abuseBOYAH. Nice one. You've given your characters greater depth. Look forward to more. Like how the UTP (Unstoppable Team Possible) can help in the oncoming war. The meeting of the teen heroes in flesh and blood again the first time. Will Kim have a reaction to eating her Nachos to fast. You know, the important issues. (: Hope to see more soon. Be Badical if it were before the movie release Have a great day Ja ne Jim |