heh, you ever planning on continuing this one? This story has possibilities.

updates plox?

that was one of the best stories i have ever read keep up the good work and continue.

Im really liking this story. your OC is keeping the story believeable yet more than ordinary. keep up the good work.

Man this is really a great story. With the relationships i would vote for Rikku cause Lulu Wakka story line would be screwed plus with the main character's personality he would be much better with Rikku and well the main and Lulu just don't match.

Ya know, since no one seems to have taken a guess at this, I think I know who's look Brad is now wearing. It's Dante from DMC, isn't it?

I like this too. I guess I was correct to add you to my favorites. Hurry with the next one please.

Great story line.

I say Rikku on the relationship because i agree with KaiserPhoenix. LuLu and Wakka's child would be a "DRASTIC" change from the original characters relationship cause when u went into 10-2 storyline where would Wakka come in cause without the child he doesn't have any real reason to be in the story.


THIS IS NOT CRITICISM! Just a question of where u would put Wakka without him becoming a father when u switched game storyline.

And remember THIS IS NOT CRITICISM! just a question.

Keep Writing!

If It's Lulu, you remove the child she and Wakka will have and that's basically a DRASTIC change. I vote Rikku. But don't start relationships just yet. FOCUS on the action. By the way, are you ever going to finish the Ranma/Loddos crossover? That's a truly awesome story

not bad

your story is classical but there is some good ideas

one thing: brad is low impact on the story. it's true that i like powerful character but brad simply didn't look he is bringing something new to the team.

have a nice day

man, great chapter.

well i think that that overdrive was good...if unfortunately useless in it's use.
wonder what else you'll need to find once you have the second sigil, maybe some sort of power source, or a jewel of a kind.

poor brad, he's going to be working overtime resolving problems before they start, but at least it seems that he has done some good so far.

what sort of abilities will he be getting soon? it would be interesting if he could summon, imagine him being able to summon something from another final fantasy game or even some other game, like maybe a massive celestial dragon of sorts, because of his transdimensional and transtemporal status he is a complete anomoly to the dimension and laws of his current dimension of residence. i mean come on, with the boosts in strength speed and everything else he could be at legendary ranma like martial arts combat levels.
Actually a few techniques from the ranma series would be good, a ki blast here a rising dragon ascension there and stuff like that, his memories give him the key...get it? Key/ki :)

anywho i'm really enjoying this story so far, but i think that theoretically he should be able to advance further in his strength, speed etc with his constant battles and the like...he's already at legendary status in his abilities dealing with the physical world, he just needs to start showing it, maybe then he can start moving on to a legendary status in the spiritual world; magic weilding powers and ki/chi abilities.
maybe what i'm trying to say is that i'm requesting more action for your character, more fight scences were he builds up his power and respect while also causing events to happen in a different order than they may have previously happened had he not been there, like he was able to get through some area before the others...or the others couldn't without something else being acomplished. then maybe something could happen to him that was suppose to happen to yuna, i'm hinting at him becoming or 'rediscovering' summoning abilities by getting some of them ability orb things...you know what i'm trying to say, and remember that because brad isn't from the same time or even world he doesn't apply to all the rules.

i'd really like to see brad get something that he shouldn't and then have that start to question their concepts of the world and that sort of thing, it definately gives you some alternatives to the final ending, seeing as you'll been trying to change things a little.

well i'm glad to have read this and i'm looking forwards to the next installment.
hoping for more soon.

great chap

This is an Awesome story so far,I like the original character Cause what do you know...Its some what Original! :)

Write more...Cause if you leave me hanging...I think I'll go Nuts

plz get over your writers block soon