AH! the best atlantis fic i've read in my life! Thank you for this awesome read... :)

This was an absolutely fanscinating story. Great, great job with the characterization; well-written too.

Very interesting story! That would be a devastating type of revenge for Michael to take. It would affect many more people than just Sheppard.

I enjoyed this story. I had thought of a similar idea as well.

My one problem about it was that Col. Sheppard would not have turned back into a human after what Michael did to him. Michael's virus would have been permanent, whereas Beckett's would only be temporary (due to the nature of the virus, Beckett's virus would suppress Wraith DNA, Michael's virus would add Wraith DNA). You're adding genes into Col. Sheppard's genome, not suppressing anything, and in a controlled experiment such as the one Col. Sheppard would likely be in, his immune system would be suppressed until Col. Sheppard's nervous system, and stem cells were altered. Col. Sheppard doesn't have any Wraith DNA to suppress, unless the virus is counting on the Conversion incident. This is why Teyla and her people are telepathic and a bit stronger than the average human.

Otherwise, great character development. Seemed a bit like Michael redux though. I think you're a talented writer too. I would put this under favorite authors, but alas' I'm not signed in to do that.

lovelovelovelovelove!

Wow, that was a good story. I really enjoyed it - well written and you nailed all the characters' traits. :) Aw, poor John, getting smacked by the chief's daughter. LOL.

oh well done you! it had a great pace, and didn't drag on forever and a day... your ending was perfect. thanks :)

i really enjoyed reading this story was a lil bit worried about the shepperd and co relationship but all turned out good in the end :) now we just need to finish under the mud hehe

Yay! Congrats on finishing! ^_^ Awesome job. Abolutely awesome.

great story!!

Lovely ending. I really liked the way you wrapped this all up - having Sheppard meet up with Michael again and make a conscious decision brought things full circle. Really nice.

squea awesome

Great story, really enjoyed it.

This one was great :D

Aww, I'm so sad it's done! It was a good ending, though. Write more fics!