Very sweet!

This was a very sweet story, sad in places but the ending was wonderful. You did an excellent job of keeping the characters as themselves, though it must have been hard, as death was never really discussed to great detail in the series. But to have chosen Heero? That was a wonderful decision because, for whatever reason, most authors try to stay away from that. But Heero is human and he can die. To further compliment you, I think you poignantly depicted exactly what would have happened if he had died.

Obviously, Relena would have been devastated, and you wrote her grief wonderfully. She was honest, hurt, confused, and those emotions mixed together wonderfully in her character. One never overpowered the other. The way you let her grief gradually trail into her normal personality was truly masterful, as well. You really showed your readers her healing process without focusing too much attention on it; things were subtle and I like subtlety best of all.

What I must really compliment you on, however, is your development of Quatre's character. He was simply amazing in this story! You took him from the crybaby little boy he was in the series and turned him into a man! I have read many stories where author's have tried to give his character more dimension and an older personality, however, none have been so convincing as your piece.

I am quickly becoming a fan of the Quatre and Relena pairing and your story has only served to further convince me that this is one of my favorite pairings. Congratulations on a truly wonderful story! Good luck and best wishes on your future stories, I'll be watching for them.

Another great Quatre/Relena ficlet! It is sad you had to kill Heero to get the two of them together, but it seems almost perfect that Quatre would be the one to pull her out of her shell. Very well done!

Aww, sad, but cute. Thanks for sharing. =3

you killed heero bad kat

Aw -wipes tear- that was sweet! I absolutely adore Quatre. The pairing is okay with me. Everyone gives Relena's character too much of a hard time. Great job!

Great one-shot, I loved it!! The beginning was very sad, poor Relena but I'm glad that Quatre was there for her and to make her whole again. I really loved the ending.

Awesome job!!

~* WhiteWolf Kyoko *~

This was wonderful. I love 4xR pairings and i think there needs to be many more of them. Thank you very much for writing this. :)

well it was ok. maybe next time you could have eero and quatre fight over relena. but nothing 2 serious.