Maybe I'm just a silly rabbit, but I don't understand it all. Is Hughes dead ? Or simply not there ?

I love this story though ! Great idea !

Sorry about all the long reviews, I'll try to make this one shorter._;;

I was surprised how hard this story hit me.I've read a lot of Mustangst/Hughes/Ishbal stories,but something about this one really shook me. I started shaking when Roy was wiping off the ashes from his face and when he started talking to Hughes at the end.

Talking to the air is not stupid, I do it all the time! This piece gets me right in the heart, Mustang wants someone to talk to so bad and there is no one. He wants someone to be his friend and just believe in him but there is no one! Yet another good Hughes story from you, keep up the awesome work!

Ilove your angst! Oh wow, this is great, i am officially your fan from now on. Yay, your stories i like! off i go to read more!

Aww that was so beautiful, I love how you made Hughes a continuing factor in this story, in the beginning I thought it was going to be a happy ending because Maes was going to be there, but it was completely shattered by the fact that it was a dream and that now Roy is somewhat insane to be talking to thin air, than I like how you made everything okay by bringing Maes right back into the story to add a sense of finality to the story. One word, Awesome. Oh and another one FAVED

That is awesome. Good use of present tense. I think in this case it's a lot better than past tense. A mixed illusion of past and present. Just wonderful.

Kaze