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| Mindy 2006-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love your writng. Very good story and it has a very valid point. Sad but it still is very informitave and helps you relize what is really important in this world. You are very tallented. |
| Band8PGeek 2006-09-19 ch 1,  | abusesoulful-sin, I...I'm scared. |
| Philip the Great 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseIs the show over? and was that just a show? please give me answers because i'm confused out of my mind. But amazing story and it kept me reading |
| razzamatazz73 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseAh... y'know, I wondered that too, but I didn't think about writing it. That was very well written; the second person POV works nicely and is very expressive in how Hugh feels. Not much to say... It rocked! -Marty :-D |
| RemembertheLegacy 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...I think I'm going to cry. This is SO good. |
| greg9570 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHugh struck me as kind of apathetic, but still pretty good job! my DSL (Internet) had another outage for four days, so that's why I haven't been online. Catch me later this evening. I have A LOT to talk to you about. |
| badwolf1 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, an emotional epic that highlighted the descent of Hugh into a pathetic drunk haunted by the memory of the son he left to die. Your ability with the written word is the better I've ever seen, amazing! |
| Dude13 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery dark, yes, but of course in a very enjoable-to-read manner. Good work as always, but...um...to be honest, I can't say that much, because I never saw the episode. Nice job though, and hopefully I'll be able to catch it sometime soon. |
| jimlover54 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseamazing, as usual. and i have to tell u that your train of thought is very unique. it seems that everything flows together. anywho, didnt u have another fic on your livejournal based around MRfDO called rock star or something? will that go on ff? just wondering. |
| MisterBlue 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuse*shakes head* Geez, Hugh. Thought you could escape responsibility, did you? Six years in the future, you're eating your words. Your career's eroded, Judy's probably on antidepressants, and you're drinking the rest of your existence away. What have you learned? Well, I can't speak for him, but I can say that I was truly blown away by the depth of this story. It paints vivid yet dark pictures in my head of a dismal future for an otherwise well-meaning man. He's royally screwed himself, and there's nowhere for him to call home now--he kissed that away--*twice*. Another sob story, but brilliantly told. --Blue |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseOne of the most intense fics I had read. Very good description of Hugh's feelings, and the development of his madness and guilt complex. Keep the good writing. |
| Stay-Away 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseYou made Jimmy die, cool I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| Cybra 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI tear up every time I read this. I like how it's not until Hugh loses everything that he realizes that he hadn't had much to begin with since he let Jimmy die. |