i knew she loved him

two words: spell check

short but satisfying story, oh and yah all the frogs should have a name, check on en. then type naruto

hell yeah! please do a sequel!

My vote?... SEQUEL! The way I see it... Rika obviously has a thing for Naruto. But what about Sasuke? If she didn't like him as well, would she still have blushed after she woke up using him as a pillow? Great story. Can't wait to read more of your writing. :D

Wait... So Naruto killed Sasuke?

make a sequel. that is just unfair to end the story like that

It seems like yet another author does not know about the first four rules of fanfiction:
1. A good author does not use Marysues.
2. A good author does not use Marysues.
3. A good author does not use Marysues.
4. A good author uses spellchecks and betas liberally.
You actually have a pretty good writing style. Work on yout spelling and puncuation and you could be a pretty good author. But please, please, please remember- Marysues are something to be imagined, not brought to life on paper. Then they're just sickenly perfect.

I forgot to add this.

A genin couldn't have enough chakra to summon dragons. It would require some one of Jounin level who has more chakra. The amount of chakra it takes to summon a animal is proportionate to the size of the summon. She couldn't posess enough chakra to summon anything, there are only two genin in the seires who can summon animals. One summons a small Weaseal, the other, Naruto summons a giant frog with the help of the Kyuubi. Also, don't put spaces after quotation marks.

You have it like this: " Bla bla."
When it should be like this: "Bla bla."

Finaly if you enable anonomys reviews, you'll get more.

You have some grammer mistakes. Tsunade was a little OOC. You said you got your info from youtube? The manga and anime are way better sources of information. I assume this takes place during Naurto part II? Naruto left to train shortly after Sasuke left. Naruto blamed himself for Sasuke's departure, he felt guilty he let Sasuke go to Orochimaru. He wouldn't say it wasn't his falt.

Also, I don't think Dragons exist in the Naruto world. Maybe you could have her summon Birds or giant Cats.

Everyone is 2-D right now. Tell us what their thinking, describe where they are. Right now, it's pretty boring. Put in more description, and give the characters depth. They seem like cardboard cut outs right now.

Another chapter down! And more wonderfully written ones to come I hope. I only spotted a few mispellings but thats no big deal. I can't wait to find out what happens next. BTW are you going to explain this whole ordeal with Sasuke? Because I'm clueless on the whole situation and would really like to know. Or you could just PM me. Extatic (sp?) for the next chapter. Good luck! :D

Interesting premise. I hope to see how this continue. C2.

very interseting. i can't wait to see waht happens next. poor hinata-chan now has a rival ^^

I think its great. Just update soon okay? Good luck! :D