Pretty good, A_E. Just stop ending your paragraphs (sections, whatever) with elipses, lay off a tee-tiny bit on the accents and put more canon characters in (_) and you'll be fine. Good job, though.

Hey, I'm just here to tell all who read this (and this is NOT self promotion) that the last chapter in this arc will be up soon (I'm still writing it) and other arcs will be on the way! So don't worry! Ciao!

This is a very creative story! I liked it a lot and I'm a Reboot fan. Is that how you spell it? Daemon? I always thought it was dameon or something...