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| Miko's Youkai 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so sweet! Given, I couldn't write something so nice, but I digress... I loved that! It so follows Fenikkusuken's Yashita in Time Lapse. Good job!! |
| Loisen 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusevery sweet story with a hot inuyasha and a cute kagome. |
| Rory4 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! I was so happy when I saw that some one had written a one-shot for that scene in 'Time Lapse'. I had to read it right away. And I loved it! You made me smile--the nurses ogling Yash was hilarious--and made me teary. Actually, as soon as I read the summary at the top of the page, I got teary. "A moment 500 years in the making and the beginning of the end to his long separation." Oh, my, tear-jerker, lol. The best part was when he held Kagome for the first time, and then when her mother said she believed great things were in store for her daughter. Very intuitive woman. One of my favorite things about her. Your writing was wonderful. Truly, it was really good. I enjoyed reading this. You did a wonderful job, and the characters justice. -Rory4 |
| TheMikoShivae 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseaws.. so adorable! |
| Nebride 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! Beautifully written - it fit in with Fenik's story perfectly. Thanks for sharing. :) |
| Kurinju-sama 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseAww, so cute! Good work. An exalent side-story/prequal thingy to Time Lapse. |
| kokoronagomu 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseoh yes, this is a perfect compliment to the phenix blade! as a matter of fact, this fic lead me to fenik! very touching story... thank you, ginny |
| Neko-Lady 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet! So Mama Higurashi trusted Inu even before Kagome did. I guess that's where Kagome gets it from. Now I'll have to see if you have written anything else. Isn't Fenik's Combat Kagome the absolute best?! I'm thinking very seriously about dressing as her at the next 'Mechacom' in Layette, La. Cheers! Neko-Lady |
| sweetrosie 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThis story is really close to how I imagined it when I read chapter 19. I must say that it was an adorable one-shot and it brightened my day. -sweetrosie |
| FuschiaFinn 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done! |
| DQBunny 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely homage to "Phoenix Blade"! You captured Yashita's excitement and nervousness very accurately and the narrative, I feel, is reflective of that. It's a bit jumpy and moves a bit too fast in some places, but I think it matches the mood that Yashita is in perfectly. I also enjoyed how Mama Higurashi instinctively knew to trust Yashita. That's our Mama for you! |
| Inuyasha Lover 813 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was cute I loved it! You did good! |