And here is where I laugh at Simon's inability to see how much they like each other :)

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Simon Simon Simon, for being 'gifted' he sure is SLOW

Very nice. :D this one was great.

Great ending line! I'm really enjoying these.

OMG! That ending was absolutely perfect! River-Jayne. Jayne-River ... son of a whore. You know, whene you think about it Simon's not very bright is he?

The last line was perfect. Absolute class! I'm glad Simon finally worked out what's going on, although it took him long enough. It does make me laugh though, that he knew something was up, from everyone else's reactions, and still couldn't get it! *shakes head* That's Simon for ya. I really did think Jayne was going to crack, he seemed close to breaking point! I thought his reactions to Simon's worries about River were really cute. I really enjoyed this, well done!

Well...I am finally glad Simon caught on, though River had to throw him a small bone;)

Honestly thought Jayne's paranoia was gonna cause him to finally yell out his feelings for River to Simon and start something. Cuz that would be just freaking hilarious to see;)

BEB