 Queen Emily the Diligent 11/28/11 . chapter 10This was sooo good. Enjoyed it immensely! |
 anon 6/14/11 . chapter 10 Everything just seems more romantic when you're married. :) |
 afraidnotscared 4/4/11 . chapter 9I loved all the other chapters in this series but this one. Kinda bothered me to see Kaoru so incredibly mean. She has her mood swings, but I don't think she's ever been that cruel. And I know she's got her period and all, but I've never seen someone behave quite so callously just because they're PMSing. |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 10That brought tears to my eyes, especially Kenshin's reaction! Aww so cute! I LOVE THEM SO MUCH! I wish you were writing more, but I understand that all good things must come to an end. Sigh. Maybe I should just write my own fic, haha!
Thank you for these wonderful oneshots! I immensely enjoyed reading them! You are a very skilled writer and as a huge fan of the series, I am even happier that you're written everyone in character!
Wonderful job! ) |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 9Haha, I would hate to mess with Kaoru during her "monthlies." Poor Kenshin! I did enjoy the ending though - have I mentioned that I love them? And well, frankly, you're awesome too for writing this so well! ) |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 8I'm SO GLAD you wrote this one! I would almost suggest writing others too leading up to their marriage - I have yet to find a well-written fic that details their relationship after Enishi leading up to their marriage and KENJI! - so maybe you could realistically fill in the gap! You are certainly a skilled enough writer, and you seem to know the characters well! I would even suggest writing from Kenshin's perspective too, in all his complexities.
Awesome! |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 7AWWWW! I really hope one of your oneshots will be Kenji being born! I excitedly look forward to that, especially since oneshots like this one seem to be building up for it! ) |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 6The evil seaweed leading up to a very nice lime... Mmm that was delightful, haha! I'm surprised seaweed can be so strong!
Ah, but I just love this! I love THEM! And you write them so believably that I can imagine everything perfectly! Another great one! |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 4Loved, loved, LOVED this one! It was very heartfelt, very sweet, very in-character (which makes all the difference!) and just wonderful overall!
Definitely have to say I love the sly sexiness between them...haha, their mischievous smiles to each other make me happy!
Great line: "She grinned. "When you're only honing one feminine skill, it doesn't become hard to gain speed in what you do." Very Kaoru! |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 3I guessed what had happened before you mentioned it, and it made me sad... Their reactions were really well done, and I loved Kenshin's comforting words. I love them so much! |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 2Haha, oh Tale of Genji, you silly story...
LOVED THIS! They are so adorable together! And the ending was so perfect, haha! This is definitely how I imagined them to be together - thank you for actually bringing my thoughts to life in such a wonderful way! |
 Raven Wolfmoon 8/1/10 . chapter 1I'm absolutely LOVING this! A very realistic portrait of a pregnant Kaoru and beautiful sleeping Kenshin! Extremely well done! |
 aosugiru sora 5/22/10 . chapter 10Brilliant job, on each and every one of these. You captured the characters masterfully, an your vivid descriptions brought the scenes to life. An excellent collection. I hope to see more from you in the future; thanks for such an awesome read. xD
Sora(: |
 Writersfable 9/11/09 . chapter 10I loved every one of these chapters. They were great! Excellent job! |
 Brukaoru 8/28/09 . chapter 10I absolutely love all of these, really. You have a wonderful grasp of the character's personalities and portray them so well. The writing is excellent, very good! Lovely work! :D |