This was an enjoyable read, very funny XD

Cute view of Tenchi & Ryoko's future.

Ever think of coming out of retirement and writing more?

Hahahahahahahaha! Funny. Logical, but still very funny. Not often you get a story like this.

Say, just out of curiosity, are you planning on a sequel. I would like to see how the next generation interacts some more.

Coll. you made a future i really wanted to see from Tenchi. To bad Ryoko still can't cook

Hahah! Nice way to bring Tenchi and Ryoko together.

OMG This is great :p I love it! and the pairing _ lol. Great job.

tht was a really cute story! :D

Kawaii-ne! - I loved it

it could be funnier than this and i expexted more

ha ha! i loved the laboratory comment!

i was almost waiting for a 'and don't touch that button'

very tenshi-ish and in character, sad it's so short though.

hehehe... so nice storie I like it so much! keep like this

I really liked the humour in your story, especially Washu, and Ryoko trying to cook. And it's so cute that the daughter is called Tenko since that's what Sasami wanted to call Ryo Ohki, isn't it (for the same reasons?)

I agree with the last reviewer that more detail would be good for the ending I'd love to know who Ayeka ends up with and more about that.

But of course I'm always happy to see Ryoko end up with Tenchi!

Awesome for the first chapter, i'm practically itching to find out the rest, please continue!

Nice beginning, and a funny scene where Ryoko tries to cook lunch. But the writer's advice to "show, not tell" applies for the last part of the story. It feels kind of rushed. And we never find out who Ayeka, Mihoshi, and Kiyone's spouses are!