Omfg...So freaking hilarious lol... Kabuto is a true genius

Ya know, coming back and reading this thing again, for the n'th time I honestly can't remember, I'm marveling at how it never gets any less funny. Or accurate, for that matter.

Mocking Mary-Sue's should be a sport! Keep up the mocktastical work :)

fangirls...oh shi- *boom*

Nice!

Tayuya-Sue. Perfect! :)

I was actually expecting it to be Kushina, raised from the dead via Edo Tensei.

Mary Sue self-inserts... I wonder what you'd think of the site now (4 years later), with the predominance of yaoi, mpreg, fem!Naruto and NaruHina.

You killed Konoha with a Mary Sue. You monster.

Wait, what exactly is this fic mocking?

and the mary-sue topples the world... *sigh* how sad T.T

-Ikasury

i dont get it o.o

Very nice, heh. Mary Sues are one of the best things to make fun of. Hell, even I've mocked Sues! ... Of course, I am far from mastering the subtle art of parody, but you are not. This is a fine fic, and I must say you are an excellent parody writer.

TTFN

Ho, joy to the evil, insane, gayness known as Mary Sues!

Well, I'm off to go Mary Sue eliminating, catch you later!

-hops on his dragon to go looking for Mary Sues to murder-

Ha, ha, ha, ha. Nothing can stand the power of Mary Sue!

Wait... Are your talking about... Mary sues? AHAHAHAHAHA! Brilliant! You actually made it realistic, even if it's really short. Gotta love your mockfics. Keep it up, and keep bashing the most overused idea's in history!