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Reviews For: Broken By Power

on the outside
2006-08-19
ch 1, anon.
abusei love the lancelot/arthur pairing. so much tension. good job capturing the emotions lancelot felt knowing arthur had loved another (yeah, arthur loved lancelot).

ps. write more of the two of em!
homeric
2006-08-14
ch 1,
abuseA very interesting one-shot. I liked the way you portrayed Arthur's despair and Lancelot's helplessness at watching his mentor and lover struggle. I'm not usually a big fan of slash, but I enjoyed this - good job!
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