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HawkAngel

This is one of the best Sesshoumaru-Rin fics I've ever read. And I like it more because you've portrayed a father-daughter relationship. Again, I really like your narrative style, and, wow, I really like your story:)

For almost three in the morning..thats pretty good actually, lol. I love the Rin quotes you added to the beginning and end of the fic, they were very fitting.

Beautiful. Very well written. ^-^

Wow, this was a great story... I really enjoyed reading it! And I liked the ending. It explained that Rin will always be with Sesshoumaru and that she will always trust him. ^_^

That was beautiful.

Hmm...I think it's good. It's very well written and very original, but the ending is lacking. I know you said it was only a one-shot, but it seems like maybe there should be something more, either within this chapter or in a second one. Overall though it was excellent. Engaging, dark and lighthearted at the same time, and written with a good character sense. Great job!

*adds to favs*

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THAT IS SO SWET! I LOVE IT ! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

Aww that was such a sweet story. Great job descriptions and characterization and everything. I really had a good feel for everything that was going on in the story. If you did continue this I would deffinately read it :) So great story and keep on writing!

I thought this was a good story very right to character and the story. Inuyasha relies alot on Reincarnation as a theme. You don't neccesarily have to believe in reincarnation to write it into a story. I know I don't believe silver haired demons were flying around feudal Japan but I love reading and writing about it. In a way I guess we would like to know what happens to Rin in this life as she once again follows Sesshomaru however, the mystery makes for a good ending and so I would not change a thing.

omg! that is so kawaaii!! which means cute in japanese. lol. thats so sweet! i love it! lol! great job!! do you do other stories??

-jakee

nice one shot! i dont think it needs more...but if you ever feel like it..thats just sweet, but its also very...savior like ;) but hey i didnt mind.Talk about lil girl dreams.