Hmm, going for the ol' "darkest just before dawn" tactic, eh? Okay, but I do hope you didn't just kill Johnny, that'd be upsetting. I look forward to next issue/chapter. Laters.

Well, crap, the bad guy's evil plan is working. And sadly rather well. But still, we're back to the action! I can't wait to see how they're going to get out of this one, and I do hope they kill Carmody for good this time, he really is getting just way too old. Well, until issue 32, then. Laters.

Well, that was different. I liked the training sessions, each in their own way, with only two not having a whole lot of luck due to their "senseis" suddenly walking out on them. And it seems you're revealing a power of sorts for the Ego Gem after all, though I'm hard pressed to say what it was Valerie did with it... And once again the Kymellians get attacked, they just can't catch a break, can they? Well, until issue 31, then. Laters!

Hey, dude. Is that alex guy gay in the comic book too? Or is that your idea?

Carmody again?! How many times are you going to make them kill him?! Although at the moment he is technically already dead... Ooh, brain hurt... Ah, well, at least now the kids all now what's been up with their powers lately, that's something at least. I look forward to their training sessions next issue, or do plan to skip straight to the smack down? Well, until then. Laters.

I'm guessing that Thanatos is the son of Thanos whom you created on your own, right? Well, at least the Pack will now know about the Infinity Gems they have, though saving the whole galxay is a bit of a tall order, but what the hey! I look forward to chapter 29/30. Laters.

Well, that pretty much sucked for the Warriors all around, didn't it? And here I was expecting Jesse to accidentally revive all the good guys with the yellow stone and strip the bad guys of their powers the same way. Oh, well, maybe later. At least now the Pack will find out what they've got in their possession. Until next issue then. Laters.

Okay, I have now read all of this fic, as well as the two part Demon Storm(well, the two stand alone parts, didn't bother with the other chunks in your other series), and I have to say you're a pretty good author. About the only current complaints are Rebecaa's death(curse you!) and the confusion early on with Katie's age in regards to the the others which you thankfully fixed, though you do need to adjust her school to be a full High School, as at age fifteen she should be either a Freshman or a Sophmore. On, balance, though, you did kill off Apocalypse for keeps, and that's one person I'll definitely never miss! I did notice a minor continuity error in the first chapter, though - you have Alex using his powers to de-grav his car, and then a little later state he and the others didn't even have them anymore, though they did quickly regain them. Just saying.

As to the most recent events, hooray, the principal is beaten and gone, and man you're being nasty to the New Warriors, though I imagine they'll be finishing up their side story next issue, right? And I'm thinking either in that issue or the next one after that they'll finally find out about the Infinity Gems and have them taken back? Well, until then. Laters.

Alex had his powers in the first chapter and they are missing in the third?

Needs a lot of work. You stretch the suspension of disbelief a bit much. Boogie just happens to be in the sewers to overhear someone yell out Alex's full name, for no apparent reason as they would just yell out Alex. Alex is suddenly gay and I suppose that's workable, but the change in everyone's personalities makes them come off as OCs.

This isn't all that bad. Keep on keepin on.

I like this one.

I liked the PP and I have though about what might happen if they grew up.

It was interesting to see how everyone changed over the years. I do like the coming home angle.

Guess I misread the ending of the last chapter. That bit about the girlfriend was wrong. :P

Um...you reveal that Alex is gay. then later on you reveal that he, in fact, has a girl friend. WTF? You also show that over the years the kids have really changed. What got me was that you resolve everything with the kids in just a few short sentences. You didn't even show the conversation. I'd have liked to see these personality changes highlighted more.

This fanfic is workable. I hope it improves as I read the following chapters