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| sparkycola1 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseNice friendship piece =) Well written as ever |
| Kourin Lucrece 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abusethis was heart-breakingly perfect. i like the way you talked about the parallels and their friendship, and how you never actually out-and-out gave the setting. i have to admit, however, that the way you described the look in danny's eyes struck me most. my uncle was in the fdny until he retired last year, lost a lot of friends that day, and i think i know exactly the look you're talking about. |
| rollins'girl 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abusehey, meant to put an author's note, but whoops. anyway, if anyone's interested, the title is taken from a Bruce Springsteen song, Empty Sky. S'a goody. sad, but good. |
| Philomena Kuroi 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was sweet. |
| spacemonkey766 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abusethat was incredible. whether it was a friendship or slash piece...both worked perfectly. The response to the trade center was very well done..i was in high school on long island at the time and ** was the only word that seemed to portray how we all felt about it, so reading that made a real personal connection for me. youra fantastic writer. i'd love to see more of your work. :) |
| Aphina 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this. I took it in a friendship way. I loved the way you showed us insite into their relationship and them s people. This was amzing, I really would love to see mrore from you. This story really touched me. |