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sparkycola1
2006-09-14
ch 1,
abuseNice friendship piece =) Well written as ever
Kourin Lucrece
2006-08-12
ch 1,
abusethis was heart-breakingly perfect. i like the way you talked about the parallels and their friendship, and how you never actually out-and-out gave the setting.

i have to admit, however, that the way you described the look in danny's eyes struck me most. my uncle was in the fdny until he retired last year, lost a lot of friends that day, and i think i know exactly the look you're talking about.
rollins'girl
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abusehey, meant to put an author's note, but whoops. anyway, if anyone's interested, the title is taken from a Bruce Springsteen song, Empty Sky. S'a goody. sad, but good.
Philomena Kuroi
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was sweet.
spacemonkey766
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abusethat was incredible. whether it was a friendship or slash piece...both worked perfectly. The response to the trade center was very well done..i was in high school on long island at the time and ** was the only word that seemed to portray how we all felt about it, so reading that made a real personal connection for me.
youra fantastic writer. i'd love to see more of your work. :)
Aphina
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseI really loved this. I took it in a friendship way. I loved the way you showed us insite into their relationship and them s people. This was amzing, I really would love to see mrore from you. This story really touched me.
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