Great story, well written and interesting.

i love how deep your writing is.. i never thought about this pairing like that, so thanks for the insight =] i love this couple, so thank you for writing a good story about them :)

Ohh, that was very nice. I like how you really describe how they are alike in so many ways, and yet are not at the same time. I really like the ending as well, it was sweet, but not corny. Great job!

Wow. That was amazing. Spectacular job. MorixKyouya is an awesome couple. ^_^ Definitely a fav.

Awesome! Now I like this pairing! I like this story too!

Oh wow. That was really...really...tender if I must say. It was beautiful.

O_O...
I'm not sure why I love this so much but I do. Very dramatically written, and the connection between Kyouya and Mori is illustrated clearly. I absolutely love this :D ::favorites list::

Superb writing as ever, Dreams-san.

‘knew you back in the CCS ExT fandom.

I’m more of a TamaKyou fan girl but now that I’ve read this, I’m considering the MoriKyou pairing too.

IC. Excellent character insights and descriptions.

Quite beautiful. I suppose that is the smartest thing I can say. :D The way you describe Mori and Kyouya and -Mori and Kyoya- is just that. And I could hear the beach...

Wow, very realistic to as what there relationship would be like. Not fluffy at all, but it totally works for them. Thanks, good job.
~Akire

Quiet, sweet and remarkably realistic ; I like your fic.
It does not strike as something grand or incredibly romantic, and it's good the way it is. You make Mori and Kyouya's relationship so trivial and blatant at the same time, it was a pleasure for me to read it. Not so bad for a crack fic ^_^

... if fifteen is your real age, you sort of scare me. The world shudders to think of what your writing will be like in a few years. You write better than many a decade senior, and your ability to make a somewhat obscure pairing like Mori/Kyouya plausible (and an interesting read to boot) is a rare one. I hope you continue to write stories such as this (quality-wise, not necessarily of the same plot or pairing) in the future.

That was wonderful and sweet. Very much. Yay!

I tink I lurve yu. XD Aw, this was so adorable! My fave odd pairing in this anime. C: Lurvely job. More soon I hope?

This is really good. I loved the part where you had Mori and Kyouya think they're looking after kids. Sometimes, it really seems like it XD. It's a cute pair~