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| emif 2006-09-23 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet. I really like it. You're right. It is the fluffy. I'm adding it to my favorite stories. |
| BrokenSeraph 2006-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseKawaii! But they were a bit too OOC, you had a very good flow going though. It made me giggle quite a bit. ^_^ |
| Sour Schuyler 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseCute. ^_^ TOTALLY cute. I think my favorite phrase was, "You're unbalanced." Lol. I loved this! |
| Darkangel Lolita 2006-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI only have five words to say what I like about this fic. It's so cute and fluffy! Meow! |
| xBakura's lovex 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuse^__^ Aw! So fluffy and cute! Write more! |
| XO'MagickMoon'OX 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAw this was so adorable! I haven't read any YGO fanfiction in a long while, and when I saw that you'd written another story, I had to read it. I was in the mood for some fluff. ^^ I still have a lot of your older YGO story alerts (Guess What? and Fireflies) in my Inbox, saving them for a day when I want something good to read and don't want to go on that needle-in-a-haystack search to find it (if you know what I mean... it's really hard to find good writing in FFN anymore T_T) Anyway, I've rambled on that long enough. This story was so kyute. I had some favorite lines: "Oh. Then, how about ‘I couldn’t stand being away from you for even that short time, so now you should return my devotion by doing something nice for me’..." Ryou's so adorable. XD *glomps him* And of course, the last line was another favorite: "I just stayed silent and pretended to sleep, because we both expressed our feelings in different ways, and he knew it. Although I had to admit, as he attempted to snuggle even closer, that his was /appeared/ to be growing on me..." (Though I think there's a mistake in it; is that "was" supposed to be there?) All in all, this story was wonderful, well-written (as per usual; I love your writing ^^) and so cute and just what I needed right now. :) |
| Misura 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked reading this; it was light and sweet in a refreshing kind of way - like icecream on a hot afternoon. |