very good story, a bit ooc, but i still loved it!

I liked how Asuka's obsession with attention was written in the story. I could imagine her revelling in it (at first), just as you described. Very nice.

That was awesome ^^ I've been looking forward to reading a good SxA fic again. Other than a few typos, with words and names (eg. Ritsuko - you spelt Ritsuku, the confusion between two, to, and too), it was really good.

Don't worry, the dividers aren't working for me either.

Great Job and truly one of my favorite stories ever. About the wedding thing, check out Nothing will ever change that by youngboch. the only difference is seele attacks them briefly but only at the reception.

You should write about the reception! *cough* Gendo dancing *cough*

Finally, a fic with an ending. Quite a bit of the ones I started to read just vanish.

This is nicely well rounded fic. Grammer is odd a few points, but nothing major.

My major concern was the beggining of the fic. It was impossible to tell if it was set during instrumentaliry or after, or if Shinji had accepted the dream world. Luckily, later chapters seemed to clear it the problem up.

The only other problem was the use of US DOLLARS in GERMANY. Asuka alsom seemed to lack in German words.

Still, good fic. As for your marriage inquiry, "The One I Love Is..." has a marriage seen. Won't say who's involved. Go read it. Worth all the time involved reading it.

God dang it, all of this writing makes me want to write.

Good story.
I'm looking forward to the next one.

good luck,
dragonking535

P.S.just because there weren't that many reviews doesn't mean that its not good or a bit better.

Well done wrap up and I must say you took the premise and ran with it. Not once was I bored while reading this. My compliments :)

Nicely done, man. You deserve a break for what you accomplished. Nothing really to comment on that probably wouldn't be stated by others on here. Once again, nicely done.

aw!

its so beautifully WAFFY i nearly started crying in fron of my mum! i have this wierd, uplifted feeling in my chest! honestly-this was great!

this sory was awesome write more like it keep up the work

Nicely done. I really liked this fic. I thought that the wedding scene was carried off really well. Looking foreward to more from you!

Very, very nice! Such a fitting end for a well-written piece. Nothing much to say but... keep up the good work!

I will be looking forward to reading your next stories!

Very nice wedding scene there, I think you nailed it pretty well. I think this is the first fic i've read with a Wedding Scene, I know the 2nd Try has one but that doesn't really count because theres only 2 people on Earth at that time. Anyway glad to see it come to an end, it had a perfect ending. Great work on it.

I think the autor of Shinji Zero wanted to write a wedding and there was another fic in which the wedding was descriped as far as I know but I don't remember the name.
The one I love had a descriped wedding at the end I think.
Keep it up.