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| Tabula-rasa33 2006-08-17 ch 1,  | abusethat was great! you should def. write more! but i did really really like it. i figured out it was aiden after - "We call her Montana—well, at least I do. If I had tagged you as Brooklyn you’d probably hit me so hard that I’d be sitting in a loony bin for the rest of my life" that was the **. haha. well keep writin! |
| kourin lucrece 2006-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse...*sniffle* this was sweet, and i really like it |
| Orison 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWhat a nice story! Very well written and man, my poor Danny... ;) Great job! |
| Aphina 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseHey I loved this. It really touched me. I fell in love with this. That;s the way I tink Danny would react to a situation. I love the way you don't realize he's talking to Aidan and eventually you knarrow it down by the people he's mentoning. I love the fact it was Aidan. Keep up the good work. |
| Sploink 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was really good! You got Danny's sorrow and isolation across really well. I think it was awesome!! |
| Jennifer 2006-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, very nice. |
| chili-peppers 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! that was great soo sad but soo good well done! |