that was so sad! but it was good! great job!

Beautiful... I was weeping at the end of it because it was so sad? The words you chose were perfect and all the emotion and grief of Crowpaw was portrayed beautifully. Keep it up...

I totally love this song! And well done on keeping the two in character. Your grammar was excellent too. Great job!

-MidnightPhoenix320-

Beautiful oneshot, and the song fits, too. (wipes eyes) I know, I'm a sucker for the Crow/Feather pairing, but still...

Completely heart-wrenching. I was in tears by the end of it.

You should definitely write more oneshots.