It was pretty good at the start.
Then I thought it was ok, it really depends on your tastes as well. 6.5/10

ah...darth vegita

Jakolza: so it worked ...DAM

Lazlo: awe that is so great! I love the ending and everything. I'm so relieved that they saved the future, I just couldn't stand it if it did happen. Now I don't have to cry after every chapter. Thanks for a great fanfic, and ignore my counter part. Keep up the great work!

NO! A Great Fanfic is complete! DO A SEQUEL I BEG OF YOU

Great Trilogy. whether you continue or youre done it was great reading your stories

:(Update,update,update. I want to know what's going to happen.:)

It is my privilege to give you a review that I rarely give. By way of explanation I have been involved in and still study martial arts for probably more decades than most people reading these fictions have been alive. Martial Arts are much like any human endeavor, there are people that are very good martial artists, and there are those that are not. But even among the good martial artists, there are those that are technically correct, performing each technique with great percision and deft accomplishment that are deemed to be quite expert, then there are those that are the martial art, feel the ebb and tides of the energies from their mind, body, and spirit, and forge those into the art they practice. You can feel it when you watch them perform their forms and techniques. They are the true artists. Writing is no different, and you are the true artist. Bravo, your story is nothing less than great.

jakolza:keep at it and let all the heros rot in hell hahahahaha i love this story, keep on writing ;)
Lazo: ...man this is great! Shock has taken over me, my mouth is still hanging open man,dam! I go for the hero's though so don't listen to my counter part. I just can't wait to see how they kill that son of a ... Gero and Gohan. Goku gonna be pissed. This is too great, and depressing. Love every thing about it, keep up the great work.

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Oh no! O.O

wow, this is way intense! Really great stuff. Ugh, it is totaly twisted with the whole gohan thing. It's really great. oh, it so sad too, I really hope vegeta makes it. Awe, I just can't wait till the next chapter. What is Goku gonna do to defeat Dr. Gero? Is he going to beat Gero? Ah, the tension is killig me! Keep up the great work!

Hahaha! I'm the Juggernaut, bitch! LOL. X-men is great. Anmazing chapter. I can't wait for another chapter. Keep up the good work.

this is probably the best chapter yet. it was no suprise that dr gero was mastermind but now i cant wait until the next update just so i can see what krillin saw in those human sized capsules

EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN KEEP IT UP
ONLY THING I WISH THAT COULD BE ACKNOWLEDGED IS POWER LEVELS
NOT EXACT NUMBERS OR ANYTHING JUST COMPARISONS OF SOME SORT IF YOU KNOW WAT I MEAN BUT OTHER THAN THAT KEEP IT UP

Once again a great chapter. I really love your style of writing, it's sort of hard to figure out, and sometimes I have to go back and read a paragraph twice, but that's what makes it good. It just means that your really intelligent. I did find a mistake with your spelling of the word Nameck or Nameckian. That's not how you spell it. It's spelled Namik, Namek, or Namekian. Other then that, it was extremely well written, keep up the good work!

No! Why'd you stop there?! I wanted to hear Goten verbally attack Trunks and Pan!! XD! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. I'll be stalking...er..I mean watching this story from now on...