ah, so THAT'S the tower. :) nice to see Schu-Schu get some much needed revenge on schneider at the end there, although i'm sure he's going to pay for that one soon.

please tell me you're intending to update this one in the very near future? *puppy dog eyes* i will be your bestest friend and dedicate some of my own rosenkreuz fun to you since you seem to like it so much. :D

...the Tower wouldn't be named after the tarot card, would it?

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schneider's gift is cool, i look forward to seeing how he makes use of it. *happy squee* i love seeing what people make of the very vague canon concept of rosenkreuz! this should be fun.

and now my fanon version of schuldig is yelling at me again...apparently i should feel sorry for him or something instead of sadistically enjoying his misery.

>:)

wow. schu's life sucks right now. see, this is a problem i have with my own personal fanon version of schu, that when i make his life suck similarly to your schu's sucky life, he won't give me a moment's peace, nagging me with complaints and badly timed plot bunnies until i shape out a happy pseudo-ending for him again. you must understand my pain, i mean, sending him back to rosenkreuz, the hap-happiest place on earth. that's just mean.

did crawford not see that coming? ;)

well that was a bit of an abrupt turn-around from the start of this fic. these guys just aren't behaving the way i expect them to.

i want to compliment your farf characterization. i'm always worried about how he'll turn out in fics when he's introduced further in than the rest of the characters (because that usually means he turns out crappy). i like it when he's intelligent, and the fact that he won a battle of wits with crawford was nice. yay farf! yay nagi!

wouldn't mind seeing some more weiss interaction with your schwarz though.

yep, from now on the weiss should totally watch the weather before they go on missions against schwarz, rain seems to be their friend.

am interested in this schneider character. reminds me of an o/c i created for my ficcie version of rosenkreuz, but then as i haven't seen schneider yet i can't make that comparison. i like the way crawford is developing too, nagi's comment about him being kicked out of the hospital made me giggle.

hmm...someone interfereing with crawfoo's visions? i continue to like your characterization of nagi, btw, hope he gets some longer scenes in the future chappies.

someone should let the weisslings know that they work much better against the schwarzlings if it's raining...
and when they seriously outnumber the schwarz in question...
damn, that wasn't fair, was it? poor schu-schu, hope he can swim. :)

particularly liked the last two paragraphs. schu logic and plotting is very interesting stuff, and this revelation of an escape plan is intriguing.

nagi continues to be adorable.

and now i actually have to work for a little while so i have to stop. crazy, that they make me earn my pay like that.

:)

okay, i have one suggestion and this is intended as constructive criticism and not bashing, because i am enjoying this fic so far, it's making a slow night at work go by more pleasantly.

i do think you should proofread your stories before posting them in the future though. there are a lot of grammatical mistakes, odd word choices and the such and it slows down the read, occasionally impeding comprehension. i point this out not to insult you but to better enjoy your work, that's all.

and i look forward to seeing where this away from crawford mood is going to lead. on to the next chappie!

oh, well then, nevermind, it's not a business-only relationship. hm. that's kinda funny, actually, to have been corrected in the first sentence of the next chapter. :)

i like nagi, he's cute as a fusser.

do you ever write with them while they're actually at rosenkreuz? that would be an interesting fic...

hm, interesting start, i will definitely continue. personally i like it when schu-schu & crawfoo are actual friends, which is the interpretation i get from the manga and animes, but the business relationship you're starting with is a nice change of pace from...other...fics. yeah. anywho, i will definitely enjoy seeing how this fic progresses.

...lonely schuldig? aw...hope he gets his attention. ;)

Love it.
Please update soon :)

Wow, I would like to say I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. I've been reading from almost th every beginning I think and I really enjoy this story. That was pretty cool what Schuldig pulled at the end there, and it was even better that Brad told him to do it. I look forward to the rest of this story. Please update soon. Happy Writing ;)

~Thalia013

Kyah~ awesome!