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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing... Loved this... We all need a good cry sometimes... JENNIFER |
| A 2006-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a shame the second person perspective isn't used more often, cause look at the great stories it can produce. Good story. |
| cyko1003 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseHoly crap, that was great - Very well written, the first I have read in 2-POV, and wow. I felt like I was siting there watching, yet strangely in her head... almost as if I was telling HER the story... very very VERY good. :) |
| A.Boleyn 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous! Beautiful! *applauds* I love the unique twist of writing in second person. Favorite passage: "His Montana, the lonely state in the middle of nowhere, with a population of nobodies. But here, he reminds you that you are a somebody." Amazing! |
| p3karen 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abusegreat litter story it was sad yet hopeful |
| sparkyCSI 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love angst and this was very well written. You've gotten her down pat! I hope this means some good fluff for Stories of the Past! LOVED IT!! |
| chili-peppers 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseoh wow that was so beautifully written! i loved it! well done good job! |
| artigiano 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abusei loved it! great job! |