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Reviews For: A Still and Quiet Conscience

JennCorinthos
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseGreat writing... Loved this... We all need a good cry sometimes...

JENNIFER
A
2006-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's a shame the second person perspective isn't used more often, cause look at the great stories it can produce. Good story.
cyko1003
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseHoly crap, that was great - Very well written, the first I have read in 2-POV, and wow. I felt like I was siting there watching, yet strangely in her head... almost as if I was telling HER the story... very very VERY good. :)
A.Boleyn
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseGorgeous! Beautiful! *applauds* I love the unique twist of writing in second person.
Favorite passage:
"His Montana, the lonely state in the middle of nowhere, with a population of nobodies. But here, he reminds you that you are a somebody."

Amazing!
p3karen
2006-08-12
ch 1,
abusegreat litter story it was sad yet hopeful
sparkyCSI
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love angst and this was very well written. You've gotten her down pat! I hope this means some good fluff for Stories of the Past!

LOVED IT!!
chili-peppers
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseoh wow that was so beautifully written! i loved it! well done good job!
artigiano
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abusei loved it! great job!
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